tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post6310022098015593413..comments2024-03-12T02:19:44.613-07:00Comments on erin summerill { THE SUMMERILL SURF }: writing inspiration - do i dare go there?i'm erin.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-89957728638796446252015-11-10T23:06:03.829-08:002015-11-10T23:06:03.829-08:00Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life an...<br /><br />Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life and mind become more severe. Enjoy the rhythm of the problems faced. No matter ga life, not a problem not learn, so enjoy it :)<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/3G9hLK" rel="nofollow">Pengobatan Tumor Bibir Atas Dan Bawah</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/m5fH7V" rel="nofollow">Obat Herbal Pembangkit Gairah Pria</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/swolqy" rel="nofollow">Obat Alami Nyeri Sendi Dan Tulang Yang Aman</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/Y1ZofO" rel="nofollow">Obat Alami Hiperemesis Gravidarum</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/MPizNl" rel="nofollow">Obat Alternatif Ginjal Bocor Anak Dan Dewasa</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/8nsF0Y" rel="nofollow">Vitamin Yang Dapat Mencegah Penuaan Dini</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/upPAIO" rel="nofollow">Obat Pembakar Lemak Tercepat</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/rBcMAO" rel="nofollow">Obat Diabetes Tanpa Efek Samping</a>keishkaylaaazzalea@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01381564380919953330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-9490265262931920992011-10-13T15:44:36.017-07:002011-10-13T15:44:36.017-07:00Heidi, you made me laugh out loud.Heidi, you made me laugh out loud.i'm erin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-59042488085774888092011-10-13T15:10:12.966-07:002011-10-13T15:10:12.966-07:00I'm writing something really dark now, and I&#...I'm writing something really dark now, and I'm loving it.Gail Shepherdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16998497900316232330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-25926953486325333112011-10-13T12:47:37.583-07:002011-10-13T12:47:37.583-07:00I learned something here...there is a "d"...I learned something here...there is a "d" word. I honestly didn't know that damn is considered a curse word--it was really common in my house growing up, and I never give it a second thought.<br /><br />I do use cursing (not usually the "d" word, just because I don't think about it) depending on the narrator. Some novels contain a substantial amount--and some don't have any.Heidi Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15056627400336997554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-41391505572223511492011-10-13T12:06:09.993-07:002011-10-13T12:06:09.993-07:00Cherie, you crack me up. I swear we could be soul ...Cherie, you crack me up. I swear we could be soul sistas'i'm erin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-819868994690939472011-10-13T09:42:54.209-07:002011-10-13T09:42:54.209-07:00I sometimes have this dilemma. I write darker stuf...I sometimes have this dilemma. I write darker stuff too, especially with my short stories. Sometimes they come off as a bit sensual. But honestly, I'm a goody-goody and a boring person in real life. I may have the D-word and the Sh-word in my MS, but it doesn't mean I say those words. I've tried using tamer swear words to substitute, but they just didn't ring true for my character (who does not have my religious beliefs...I should convert her. LOL!)<br /><br />Rule of thumb for me is to never use those words for the purpose of shocking the reader. It has to be true for your character. And overdoing it is not good either.Precy Larkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16714824672731935371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-26243260811410578142011-10-13T05:24:01.043-07:002011-10-13T05:24:01.043-07:00I'd personally never cross my moral and ethica...I'd personally never cross my moral and ethical values and principles in writing, since writers are the teachers of society and can influence readers in a good and in a bad way.<br />I'm not a puritan, but I don't like bad language in books, unless it's really necessary for the character. But most usually, writers will put swearing and unethical things in their books only to shock and to attract attention. I have zero respect for such people :)DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-83086863225780041872011-10-12T18:09:06.011-07:002011-10-12T18:09:06.011-07:00Be true to your inner author! When in Rome... that...Be true to your inner author! When in Rome... that's all the cliche's I got. But I am serious, be true to your inner artist. Just because you can't paint Jesus pictures doesn't me that you shouldn't paint (if that makes sense). But I have a rule for myself- Don't write something I wouldn't want my kids to read. (even if they were of age)Honey and Hotstuffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00646053058799340749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-29796563613932368372011-10-12T16:30:54.746-07:002011-10-12T16:30:54.746-07:00THANKS...looks like a lot of fun chaos. :)THANKS...looks like a lot of fun chaos. :)Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522861943931628690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-44517217985767474102011-10-12T16:26:40.549-07:002011-10-12T16:26:40.549-07:00Charlie, you crack me up! But great thoughts. Yes,...Charlie, you crack me up! But great thoughts. Yes, I've felt the same. Like the character just has to say it. <br /><br />Amy, I love that Tim is so strong. You guys are great examples and I seriously have so much respect for you.<br /><br />And Elizabeth, welcome to the chaos!i'm erin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-47874449645685528652011-10-12T16:04:52.227-07:002011-10-12T16:04:52.227-07:00I debated on commenting since I'm certainly no...I debated on commenting since I'm certainly not a writer, but I thought I'd give my 2 cents anyways. I'm going to say this from a career standpoint and not just hobby (even if writing is not your career that pays the bills, it's the perspective I have for what I'm going to say).<br /><br />For our home, Tim has chosen not to compromise his faith for his work. For instance, one of his peices was to draw a scene of the characters having a seance. he wouldn't do it. Sure it wasn't HIM doing the seance, but by being a part of promoting it he's by association saying it's ok, which for our family is not. <br /><br />So that's my opinion. If your religious beliefs would keep you from using that language then writing it for pleasure reading doesn't seem any different. The only time I'd see it differently is if it were based on a true person, like writing someones biography. Editing their real words would be like editing history. Then again, I'm not a writer and have not been faced with this. :)A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15553733761594023263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-50087535916321931492011-10-12T13:52:27.391-07:002011-10-12T13:52:27.391-07:00Wow, lots of comments.
I admit right up front I r...Wow, lots of comments.<br /><br />I admit right up front I rarely hesitate before dropping a damn or a hell. (Yes, I said it.) And bastard. That one I didn't even know was a curse until I was a teenager.<br /><br />The other ones, which I think of as "hard" curse words, I avoid. I will NEVER drop an F-bomb in my writing; I think it's tasteless and crude.<br /><br />But then comes the question, "What if my character is crude?" What if you have a foul-mouthed druggie bad boy as a character, and these words are completely normal to him? <br /><br />Sometimes, since I write fantasy, I can use a made-up curse, but they're frequently very fake sounding (though its easier to get away with it right now, since my protagonist curses in his native tongue). Or, as my sister does, I just say "He cursed," maybe followed by a "she cringed." If I can do that, I will. I don't like reading curses; I don't like writing them.<br /><br />Granted, there have been a few times where I sit frozen over the keyboard because my protagonist wants to say this word, he has to say this word, he's screaming it in my brain and I'm fighting him and boom, it comes out of the page and I stare. And erase it. And then rewrite it because nothing else works.<br /><br />Anyway, my philosophy comes down to this: it's the character's language, not mine, but it's my responsibility to keep it clean. AKA I'll do what I see fit, but keep in mind that if it gets published, my bishop will likely read it. ;) And that applies to all novel content, not just the dirty words.Charlie N. Holmberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13546802577363686054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-9792054923244058192011-10-12T13:07:15.043-07:002011-10-12T13:07:15.043-07:00JA, I always make comments like that about my chee...JA, I always make comments like that about my cheese. ha ha... no I don't. Only some times...ha ha...ok, not at all. <br /><br />Stacey, I should try that. It sounds crazy, but maybe it might help you get into your character's mind faster.<br /><br />RAchel!!! I'm so happy you stalk too. I'm kind of a sidler, creeper, lurker...say what you will, I find myself always stalking others.i'm erin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-22355645784354906872011-10-12T12:56:53.497-07:002011-10-12T12:56:53.497-07:00I dropped the D-word in my current work as well ev...I dropped the D-word in my current work as well even though I never say that. But then again the girl's father just died so I think it was justified. As long as the swearing isn't so random - like the character swear about everything i.e. "this f'in cheese is delicious!" then I think it's okay, but there has to be a reason. and I really don't like the F word in YA at all.Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-70723819225625119902011-10-12T12:38:37.202-07:002011-10-12T12:38:37.202-07:00I heard once of a writer who drafted and didn'...I heard once of a writer who drafted and didn't restrict anything - language, etc. Then when they [I know this isn't grammatically correct, but I can't remember if it was a man or a woman writer :)] went back to edit, they would tone it down.<br /><br />Like Katie said above, you have to determine what you're comfortable having your name associated with - and that's different for everybody.Stacy Henriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03303383087338174942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-69831234884430890972011-10-12T12:35:45.417-07:002011-10-12T12:35:45.417-07:00Erin, I thought I should let you know that I'm...Erin, I thought I should let you know that I'm stalking you via your blog. And now that I have told you, it isn't stalking...right? Anyway, I curse a ton as well...and most of the books I read do also.I think if you are using swear words to add edge to the story and it works, go for it. If you are using swear words to try and be edgy, readers can tell. Save em' up and use them when you need them. I mean, when your character needs them.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03170092810276163447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-70855669591674670072011-10-12T12:34:59.476-07:002011-10-12T12:34:59.476-07:00gawd, I must have led a sheltered life. D-word?
D...gawd, I must have led a sheltered life. D-word?<br />Death? Doo-doo? Dilbert?<br />Maybe it's not made it across the Altantic yet.<br />Whatever the word is, if it gives the character more realism, then go with your instint :o)Iainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189124199119851897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-25617137156875981572011-10-12T12:21:40.528-07:002011-10-12T12:21:40.528-07:00Lacy, I know that's my issue also. I have a ba...Lacy, I know that's my issue also. I have a bad bad bad mouth. <br /><br />Katie, I think I totally agree with you. <br /><br />Jenny, do it!<br /><br />Aubrey, I love you. I can't wait to see that baby of yours.<br /><br />Jolene, I'm super intrigued! I totally want to read your book. Need a beta?<br /><br />Jessie, I know you're down with the f bomb. ha ha. <br /><br />Peggy, snort.i'm erin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13729541389129887477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-38432056364734771542011-10-12T12:07:42.263-07:002011-10-12T12:07:42.263-07:00It's all about finding the harmony between wri...It's all about finding the harmony between writing the story the way it needs to be written, and writing what you're still comfortable having people read. But never the f word. It gains you nothing, yet costs you a lot. Oh, and your most frequently used expression of late... Um... you might not want to use that one either, because then more than just your own kids might start using it. ;)Peggy Eddlemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10241451940725996650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-41612364783467422872011-10-12T11:13:34.487-07:002011-10-12T11:13:34.487-07:00I think if you want to write a book and use those ...I think if you want to write a book and use those words, I have no problem with it. It all comes down to character development. Your characters are going to be just like people we meet every day. Some cuss, some don't.BJ Forsgrennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-86992628569910598502011-10-12T10:51:16.266-07:002011-10-12T10:51:16.266-07:00You better effin' believe that I use the B-wor...You better effin' believe that I use the B-word! And D-straight, I am down with the killing sprees. Wait, I didnt mean all that. My real opinion is like Aubry's...if it fits the extreme situation, some language needs to match. Never the F bomb though.Jessie Humphrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05950401078130239174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-40019560164433898082011-10-12T10:50:16.825-07:002011-10-12T10:50:16.825-07:00Okay. So, NORMALLY I'm a little careful. But I...Okay. So, NORMALLY I'm a little careful. But I just finished a book, and I wanted it to have the crowd that I hung out with in high school.<br />There is a lot of language in it, the main thing I've been asking people - is it too much? is it enough? Does it come across as genuine? Because not one of these characters would come off as genuine without it.<br /><br />I don't take the Lord's name in vain, and I really don't use damn - though, not on purpose. Pretty much everything else makes it into the book, though.<br /><br />Again - I think it depends on the story, the characters. It needs to flow with who they are. Nothing irks me more than the bigass tough guy saying, OH shoot!Jolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-17994620447251796932011-10-12T09:44:58.096-07:002011-10-12T09:44:58.096-07:00My personal opinion is that if it is an extreme si...My personal opinion is that if it is an extreme situation it is unrealistic to never use extreme language if that fits your character. <br /><br />the only one I don't like at all and would never ever use is the F word. It just rubs me the wrong way. I don't like it at all, and some of the lesser cuss words can convey just as much frustration and anger without being so harsh or shocking to the reader. <br /><br />But also, use very sparingly. One cuss word goes a long long way.Aubreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01993824625567055858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-91010904083388378382011-10-12T09:29:01.969-07:002011-10-12T09:29:01.969-07:00I'm with Katie. I think, one day my child is g...I'm with Katie. I think, one day my child is going to read this. But, I also know that I can talk to them, and let them know why I wrote something darker. That is difference for me, there would have to be a big reason that I wrote it.<br /><br />I would love writing a mystery someday, and totally kill everyone off!!Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15384006.post-73313731836836989932011-10-12T08:33:43.752-07:002011-10-12T08:33:43.752-07:00That's a hard one. I think it just comes down ...That's a hard one. I think it just comes down to what you're comfortable with. I always think about my kids reading my stuff and thinking if I would want them reading it one day. And I also think, if it's all over the place in your book, it loses it's effectiveness. Well placed swears mean more. You feel me? ;)Katie Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17554091817717890150noreply@blogger.com